雅思写作百问百答 | 真得有人能写出雅思9分的作文吗？

2016年05月06日16:57 来源：小站教育作者：小站雅思编辑: 参与（0）阅读（11755）

摘要：雅思9分，即雅思满分作文，一直像一个传说一样，只听说过，但见过的人非常少。所以有同学就问了，到底有没有人能考出雅思写作9分呢？本文，为大家带来详细的解答，详情见文章。

常常能看到所谓的雅思9分范文，于是有人问了，一个母语非英语的考生，到底有没有可能拿到9分呢?对于这个问题，为了让回答更有说服力，同样地为大家搬来了雅思考官的回答：

The answer is yes. Band 9 is not reserved for native English speakers. Remember, the IELTS exam is primarily a test for people whose first language is not English. An educated native English speaker should be capable of getting band 9 without too much difficulty. In fact, an English speaker who writes/speaks well (e.g. a journalist) should be 'off the scale' (beyond band 9).

Note: I said band 9 was possible, I didn't say it was easy!

答案是Yes。并不是只有母语为英语的人能考出雅思9分。记住，雅思考试只是一个为那些母语非英语的人而设计的，对于受过教育的母语是英语的人来说，拿到9分并非难事。事实上，对于母语为英语并且能运用得非常好的人来说，比如记者，往往能拿到超过9分的成绩。注意：我只是说拿到9分是可能的，并没有说它很简单噢!

从考官的回答来看，雅思9分确实是存在的，接下来，就为大家带来一篇雅思9分作文，并配有详细的点评：

Children who grow up in families which are short of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children who are brought up by wealthy parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Some feel that the children of low income families are better equipped to deal with difficulties posed by the ‘real world’ when they grow up and they also believe the privileged children of wealthy families are less fit to deal with these difficulties . The implications and veracity of this argument seem self-evident, but in fact require closer examination. ( 58words )

点评：

1+ 1 模式，最后 1 句为主题句。此段的主题句稍微有点特殊，它的确否定了前面所提到的观点，从而表达出了自己的观点，此外还引出了下文。

特别是最后半句：but in fact require closer examination ，感觉是在抛砖引玉。

The popular wisdom is that children of poorer families learn early on the value of a buck, and are thus naturally better suited to stretching moneywhen times get tough in adulthood. Inversely, the children of wealthy families, thoseborn with a silver spoon in their mouths, are believed to be completely ignorant of the value of money, having had everything provided for them in their youth and oftentimes erroneously expecting the same situation in adulthood. They are believed to be prone to overspending and financial irresponsibility. This belief, though logical, overlooks one key point which is , of course, education. (100words)