【小站出品】2016年8月20日雅思G类写作大作文范文

2016年08月23日14:25 来源：小站教育作者：小站雅思编辑

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Task：Some people believe that private schools should not be allowed because it is an unfair advantage.What is your opinion?

有人认为私立学校不允许存在，因为它们存在不公平的优势，你的观点呢？

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Some people argues that it is unreasonable for private school to exist as students in these school are enjoying more advantages than students in other schools. However, I completely disagree with this idea.

Firstly, Education is a kind of resource, and people pay to obtain resource. It is similar to purchasing a product at the market. People pay more because they expect products with high quality and functions. And private schools are usually more expensive than public schools just because they have the ability to provide better education. Parents have spent a great amount of money on education for their children, their kids are supposed to enjoy a decent education resource than what they can get from other schools.

Secondly, the supplements private schools provide are mostly focused on extra-curricular activities, aiming to enhance their ability in a well-around aspects instead of increasing their score in the final examination that students from all schools should take. For example, many private schools have sports games, in which students need to have good physical capability and to cooperate with other members. And their teamwork ability is trained as well as their bodies.

Finally, cancelling private schools are unfair to the poor, as there will be less vacancies for children from impecunious families if all students have to go to public schools. Children with well-off family background can have an alternative choice, which can provide more places in public schools for students who have no choice.

In conclusion, to some extent, children in private schools can get more benefits as their parents paid more for their education opportunity, however, it is not beneficial to the society as a whole to forbid private schools.

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