2018年5月5日雅思大作文7分范文：城市化问题

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摘要：2018年5月5日场的雅思考试已经结束，现为大家带来本场雅思写作真题及范文详解。本场雅思大作文为经典老题，讨论大城市拥堵问题应该如何解决，将工厂搬到郊区去是否可行？请看范文详情解析。本期范文来自唐老雅。

2018年5月5日场的雅思考试已经结束，小站雅思君为大家带来本场雅思大作文写作真题及7分范文。本场雅思大作文为社会类话题，题目是：Some people think traffic and housing problems in large cities can be solved by moving companies and factories and their employees to the countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.请看唐老雅的写作审题及7分写作范文。

雅思大作文审题

本题的核心问题是：城市的交通和住房压力很大，于是政府鼓励企业搬迁到农村地区去，此举是好还是坏?我们的惯性思维当然是：此举甚好!因为企业一旦搬出城市，不仅空气好了，交通和住房压力都会大大地降低，同时还会带动农村当地的经济和发展。这些都是很有道理的，但是，大家可能没有想到，当企业搬到农村地区后，很多原来住在城市的工作人员就得往返于农村与城市之间，同时，企业若到农村地区，产品运输也会遇到更多问题。因此，如果政府鼓励企业搬往农村，就应该建立相应的配套基础设施，这样才能既降低城市交通住房压力，同时又保证企业正常经营。

从本期开始，老雅将结合每周考试真题，给大家谈如何在写作中实现“批判性思维”(critical thinking)。首先想申明的是，所谓批判性思维并不高深，简单地说就是我们日常生活里常说的“一分为二地看问题”。大家都同意或都反对的观点，我可以从不同角度、不同层次看出这个观点的合理和不合理之处，也就是比别人看得更深、更细、更全面，做到这一点，就可以说你具有了基本的批判思维能力。

本题谈及将大企业搬迁到乡村，以此来解决城市的交通和住房问题。那么，批判性思维在这里如何体现?唐老师认为，可以首先讨论将大企业搬迁到乡村如何可以有助于解决城市交通和住房问题(人口减少导致交通需求下降，住房需求下降)，然后转换角度讨论此举潜在的风险：乡村的基础设施落后导致企业不容易生存;企业员工需要在城市和乡村来回奔波等。这样，本题的思维就不是只有一个角度，而是拥有了两个相关的角度(大城市的角度和企业的角度)。好了，从本题中，大家可能已经体会到：转换讨论问题的角度，可以使我们的思维带上批判性的色彩。

雅思写作7分范文

With the economic boom and rapid development of urbanisation, more and more people are now rushing into big cities, which has imposed great pressure on the urban housing and traffic. As one of the solutions to this problem, the government encourages businesses to move to the rural area, which I believe will be very effective to solve the problem of housing and traffic in cities.

On the one hand, most big cities are suffering from large population and limited resources. If big companies and factories, together with their huge number of employees, move to the countryside, there will be fewer people living in the city, then with the housing pressure reduced, the housing prices will surely go down. Meanwhile, the urban traffic will also improve because the number of commuters to and from work every day is now smaller. On the other hand, businesses moving to rural area will stimulate the consumption and facilitate infrastructure in this area apart from offering employment opportunities to the local people.

However, some problems may arise if companies move to the countryside. One problem is that the rural area is generally backward in transportation and communication system, which may cause great inconveniences for companies. Besides, once many manufacturing factories rush to the rural areas, the peace and quiet in the areas will be immediately disrupted, hence a lot of environmental and social issues.

Although there may be transportation, communication and environment problems if businesses move to the country area, I believe it is worth trying because it is an effective way to both solve the traffic and housing problems in major cities and improve the rural economy.(273 words)