雅思口语题库话题part2范文积极的改变positive change in your life
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本期奉上雅思口语话题题库part2范文：喜欢的花园Describe a garden you visited and liked，范文共有3个版本，分别有7分高分考生，2篇原创范文，还不速来围观，本范文百搭，总有一款适合你。友情提示：考生应该尽量避免传统的背诵套句或者是模版的口语学习方式，去学习口语范文中地道的词组搭配以及英美人士的思维方式，更加关注词组和逻辑思维两个层面。另外，就是要从扣题角度出发，看优秀范文如何从扣题的方面来展开口语话题。戳红色文字链接，查看范文详情：
Describe a positive change in your life
You should say:
What the change was
When it happened
How it happened
and explain why it was a positive change
范文分析：The day after I got back from my holiday I turned up to do the Parkrun at my local park. I can tell you the exact day! It was 24th August 2013 – I know this because the whole point of Parkrun is that if you register (which is free) then the organisation records your time each week and you can access it online afterwards. The first time I went I didn’t even manage to run the whole way round, but I did finish, and I did get a great sense of achievement. Because you know your time, it is quite addictive, you find you do want to go again the next week and see if you can improve! My local parkrun is huge, with well over 500 runners taking part every week – so even though I was pretty slow, I found I wasn’t the slowest.
高分语料：It was 24th August 2013 – I know this because the whole point of Parkrun is that if you register (which is free) then the organisation records your time each week and you can access it online afterwards.
范文分析：Thanks to my grandpa, that day I realized that I was not as weak as I had thought and I could conquer my fear to take on any challenge ahead.From that time on, I started to go to school and go out with friends on my bike and finally I was able to enjoy the pleasure of feeling independent and mature. Maybe at that time, my grandpa’s purpose was only to encourage me to ride, but thanks to it, I became stronger and more confident about myself in general. Several years later, I read a quote that says “Life is like riding a bicycle. To keep your balance, you must keep moving on”. It reminded me of that day and the important basic lesson that my grandpa taught me.
高分语料：I read a quote that says “Life is like riding a bicycle. To keep your balance, you must keep moving on”.
范文分析：The perception of life, reality and dreams seem like have changed in me and I am happy for the changes. It has helped me find the reality, a new me. Now I love myself even more with my every possibility and dream. Now I am taking a journey to look forward and reach a definite goal I have. I don’t know where it would go but I learnt to walk alone, confidently and I love my own reflection.
高分语料： I don’t know where it would go but I learnt to walk alone, confidently and I love my own reflection.