【高分语料库】雅思写作环保类——废物利用
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In many countries, there is no enough recycling of waste materials (eg. paper, glass, cans).What are the reasons and how to solve it ? 很多国家，废料的循环利用不尽如人意，原因何在，如何解决?
【头脑风暴】
废料处置以及再循环利用，比较日本和中国，日本做的更好：分类处理生活垃圾，人们有环保意识，节能意识，废料对于环境的污染很少，废料得到充分的循环利用。相反，中国做得不尽如人意。有些人缺乏环保意识，媒体的宣传力度不足，政府对于乱丢生活的垃圾的现象也没有明确的规范。同时，废料处理基地和废料处理技术也有待改善。
【范文赏析】
{首段}：背景介绍 + 争议焦点 + 写作目的
Recycling the waste and developing regenerated materials is a link that is essential for the national economic construction. Alarmingly, it is not rare to see that litterbugs almost appear in every corner of individual city. Even worse, the failure to properly recycling wastes will pose a threat to the sustainable development of natural resources. This essay aims to ascertain the reasons and solutions.
【解析】
1. Recycling the waste and developing regenerated materials is a link that is essential for the national economic construction.收旧利废，发展再生资源是国民经济建设中一个不可缺少的环节。
2. Alarmingly, it is not rare to see that litterbugs almost appear in every corner of individual city. 令人担忧的是，每个城市的每个地区几乎都有乱扔垃圾的人。
3. The failure to properly recycling wastes will pose a threat to the sustainable development of natural resources. 不能有效地循环垃圾会对于自然资源的可发展造成严重的威胁。
【亮点】
1. is essential for 对于……是重要的
2. it is not rare to see that …… 很常见的是……
3. pose a threat to …… 对……造成威胁
{二段}：人们为何未能废料循环利用
Indeed, what some people are doing is wasting precious natural resources and disposing of garbage randomly. The reasons why recycling waste materials leaves much to be desired are not far to seek. First, some cities fail to establish enough recycling sites to collect and tackle waste materials. Meanwhile, some countries lack efficient techniques in terms of waste treatment. Another major reason is that some people have little knowledge about how to deal with life waste or they simply lack eco-friendly consciousness.
