雅思写作7分之路第二站——4种方法让你完美收场结尾段
- 2016年02月17日14:31 来源:小站教育作者:小站雅思编辑
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同样,比较推荐的国际通行的结尾段由2部分并且由2句话构成:1归纳句(归纳主体段的主要论点);2收尾句(以下分析了四种方法)
如何写归纳句?
词汇:
in general
on the whole
generally
in summary
in conclusion
to summarize
to conclude
to sum up
归纳观点:
From the above comparison and contrast, anyone can safely conclude that…
When the advantages and disadvantages are carefully compared, the most striking conclusion is self-evident.
Judging from all evidence offered, we may reasonably come to/draw the conclusion that…
From what has been discussed above, we may safely arrive at the conclusion that…
通用句型:
It is true that to do… brings about both positive and negative results.
But we can try our best to reduce the negative influence to the least extent. Besides, compared with the positives effects, the disadvantages would not so much.
What we must do is make sure that the positive ones are encouraged and the negative ones are eliminated as far as possible.
All these opinions make sense, and consequently it is hard to choose the best of them. In my opinion, such matters must be left to individual’s conscience.
如何写收尾句?
(一)、建议法
思路:针对一个问题提出自己的建议或提出一种妥善的解决之道
模板:
Therefore, it is (strongly) suggested that … (从句)
It is urgent (necessary) that appropriate (effective/proper) actions
(measures/steps/method) should be taken to correct (improve) …
Both government and ordinary citizens should join hands to make this
world a better place to live in, not only for ourselves, but also for
future generations.
题目:Many parents complain that computer games have no value to their children’ studies. On the contrary, those online games have produced a lot of negative on their mental and physical development. Do you agree or disagree with this view?
结尾段范文:In summary, from both physiological and psychological points of view, computer games are indeed valueless and may exert negative impact on the development of young children. Therefore, it highly recommended that parents and schools should be alert to this problem, and restrict children’s access to those computer games.
(二)、未来法
思路:对事物将来的发展前景(正面/负面、积极/消极)做出合理预测,指出趋势
模板:
Therefore(Thus), it is projected(predicted) that …(从句)
With the advent/advantage of …, it is forecast that…(从句)
My prediction about … is that …(从句)
Personally speaking, I envision a future when …(从句)
题目 1:Some people think that visitors to other countries should respect the local customs and imitate the local behaviors. However, other people who disagree with them think that the host country should welcome different foreign cultures brought by these visitors. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
结构:(双边论证,观点讨论)
引言段:通过背景描写引出话题,并提出一个问题,即游客与东道国之间如何互动
主体段 1:同意意见一方的观点,即游客应该尊重当地习俗并加以模仿
主体段 2:反对意见的另一方观点,他们认为东道国应该对异族文化采取欢迎态度