2017年1月7日雅思真题大作文范文
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Task：Art classes, like painting and drawing, are not as important as other subjects, so some people think that it should not be a compulsory subject at high school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
思路和范文：
第一段：还是简简单单的做一个同义改写，然后明确的表达自己的观点~
When it comes to the issue about the necessity of art classes, some people may argue that these courses deserve to be set as compulsory courses, and I agree with this opinion.
第二段：做一个让步，承认艺术课程确实会影响成绩
Admittedly, art subjects may influence students' academic performances to some degree. In high school, well-motivated students will make painstaking efforts to receive higher grades because they intend to be enrolled by excellent universities after graduation. Then, there is a contradiction between art classes and other courses since students may spend much time on art but art may not be helpful for their academic performances. Nevertheless, there still exist some benefits if high schools maintain art subjects.
第三段：放松身心~
To begin with, art classes could be regarded as leisure activities for students. As is mentioned above, it is common for self-disciplined students to mainly concentrate on academic courses. However, everyone could be exhausted after studying for a long time and students need to recharge their batteries through other activities. Thus, art classes should not be cancelled since students could listen to music or draw a picture, through which they could relax themselves.
第四段：作为兴趣爱好，有利于结识更多朋友
In addition, students could gain some skills through art classes benefiting their social network in the future. It is acknowledged that individuals are willing to make acquaintance with people who share the same hobby. Taking art classes allows students to cultivate their interests, such as playing piano or drawing pictures. When students go to a university and enter the work force later, such hobbies could function to enlarge their social network.
第五段：还是简单明了的概括整篇的核心观点就好~
To sum up, art subjects should not be replaced of by other courses, considering that students could relax themselves and make more friends with art.
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