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2017年7月8日雅思真题大作文范文:小孩自由

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摘要:为大家第一时间带来7月8日雅思写作考试真题范文。本次大作文考的是社会类话题,积极与消极题型,探讨小孩有了更多的自由后的利弊。请看小站版范文,四段式,范文原创自小站范钰红老师 327 words。

In many parts of the world, children have more freedom than they used to have. Is this a positive or negative development?在世界很多地方,小孩获得了与以往相比更多的自由,这是积极还是消极的发展。

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首段介绍背景、改写题目并且引出一方的观点。正文第一段论述了让孩子自由的去选择和决定可以带来两个具体的积极影响;分别为培养他们的责任感以及提升独立性和解决问题的能力。正文第二段论述了过度的自由会导致孩子陷入绝境。总结段明确了立场,即在一个程度上的自由有助于孩子的成长。

范文

In the past decades, children are required to obey the rules or regulations set by parents and teachers. Nevertheless, nowadays, more freedom is accessible to them since some educational experts advocate it is beneficial for children’s individual development.

Apparently, the free right to choose and decide, as the key element of this kind of freedom, is indispensable throughout the growth of children. Toddles are allowed to pick up their favorite toys or shoes; pupils have the right to join the clubs or extra-curricular activities that interest them most; high school graduates make the choice to attend university or seek for jobs. There is no doubt that this practice is conducive to build up children’s awareness of being accountable for their behaviors and decisions. Furthermore, without interference from parents or teachers, children have to think deliberately and make full preparations both mentally and physically for tough situations that may arise when they determine to follow their heart. Obviously, under such circumstance, the ability of independence and problem-solving can be strengthened, as well as their characters can be shaped as remarkable as possible.

It must be clear that the definition of children’s freedom is not to do everything they want, which is the same case as human being’s right of liberty. In other words, the degree of freedom should be controlled by their supervisors. As children are naive and ignorant, it is hard for them to distinguish between wrongdoings and right habits. If they are permitted to purchase whatever they like no matter how expensive the products are; to watch cartoons no matter how long they last, what would happen on them? Undoubtedly, that is not the way to respect them but to trap them into an awful situation.

In conclusion, as far as I am concerned, children deserve the freedom and it does play a positive role in helping them become productive and responsible social members as long as such freedom is restricted to an appropriate and unacceptable extent.

范文原创自小站范钰红老师 327 words

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