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2017年11月25日雅思真题写作大作文高分范文

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摘要:为大家带来2017年11月25雅思写作高分范文,本场写作题目为社会类话题,题目是:As major cities around the world are growing fast and many problems occur. What are the problems that young people five in cities are caused by continued growth? What solutions do you suggest?

为大家带来雅思写作2017年11月25日场的高分范文,本场写作题目是比较贴近现实的题目,年轻人居住大城市面临的问题以及解决方案。乍一看这个题目我们会不知道从何入手,有个别同学甚至审题失误。但是我们仔细分析,可以把作文分为四个自然段来写。第一段可以描写一下当今大城市的现象,然后可以说年轻人面临的一些问题。第二段、第三段作为理由段可以说明一下这些问题的细节(可以说就业方面的压力,要注意是年轻人面临的问题),然后再给出自己的解决方案,要注意方案的可行性。最后一段对自己的观点进行总结,可以说一下当今年轻人应该怎样面临这样的环境,摆正自己的心态。范文来自雅思哥,话不多说,范文自取:

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As major cities around the world are growing fast and many problems occur. What are the problems that young people five in cities are caused by continued growth? What solutions do you suggest?

There seems to be many problems to young people today in fast growing cities such as Beijing, London and Sydney etc. This essay will analyse some typical problems and offer possible solutions.

One evident problem is the poor behaviours of the young. Nowadays, young people are easily influenced by the questionable contents such as those violent images in the mass media and on the internet etc. For example, the youth have easy access to social networking websites on which they might come across inappropriate language and behaviours of adults without any expectation. Young people who crave attention may imitate these as a way to distinguish themselves.

I think the key factor to alleviating the situation is for teachers and parents to pay more attention to the development of young people's personality and morality instead of focusing on the academic performance only. In this way, students are more likely to become active and able members of the society another obvious problem is the increasing rate of youth unemployment. One of the most immediate effects of the problem is that those jobless graduates cannot find a way to earn a living; thus, being unable to support themselves and their families or to cover the loans which they might have for their expensive education, creating much pressure on themselves and their families, both financially and psychologically. This is far from a personal or private problem but also an issue for society as a whole. When the rate of youth unemployment uses, it may increase the chance of social instability, for the jobless young people with resentment and disappointment may easily form gangs or groups to commit robbery or other more serious crimes.

An important thing concerning young graduates themselves should be taken into consideration to address this problem. They should be advised to adjust their expectations and embark on some seemingly more fundamental work, for example, jobs in the communities or rural areas. This may work efficiently to reduce the current unemployment rates.

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