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2018年6月2日场雅思写作大小作文:社交网络的利弊

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摘要:2018年6月2日场的雅思考试已经结束,小站雅思君为大家带来本场雅思写作真题范文及解析。本场雅思写作真题是:Many people today prefer to socializing online to spending time with friends in local community. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?范文来自唐老雅。

一起跟着小站雅思君来回顾一下2018年6月2日的雅思写作真题。本场雅思写作大作文为:Many people today prefer socializing online to spending time with friends in local community. Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages?许多人如今更喜欢在社交网络上和朋友消磨时间。这是利大于弊的事吗?

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雅思大作文解析&审题

本周是一个大家都非常熟悉的话题。我们现在喜欢在网上交友,却不愿意和邻居聊天,这个现象是好还是坏呢?

有些同学拿到这个题目,可能非常开心,马上就会想到网上聊天的种种坏处,比如伤害身体,不安全,而且交不到真正的朋友,等等。也可能有很多同学想到网上交友的种种好处,比如节约时间,提升效率,不受时间空间限制,等等。

这样的作文就是典型的“一边倒”结构,就是只讨论“网上交友”的好处/坏处,但即使同时讨论“网上交友”的好处和坏处,就本题而言,也是不够的,因为没有涉及到题目给出的另外一个关键信息“在当地社区和朋友一起度过”。仔细审题后,我们会发现,本题其实需要考生比较“网上交往”和“与朋友在线下交往”两种与朋友交往的方式的。因此,无论我们采取哪一种行文结构(一边倒或者双边讨论),我们都需要涉及这两个方面,如果仅涉及“网上交往”,在task response方面就是不完整的。也就是说,当考生在论述“网上交往”的好处或者坏处时,一定要在与“线下交往”的比较中来进行才可以,没有比较,这个作文就是没有完整回答题目的问题,会被扣分。

雅思写作大作文范文

When it comes to socializing with friends, online interaction is a highly convenient tool, but this does not mean that face-to-face interaction is becoming something of the past. Regarding socializing online with friends, there are clear advantages and disadvantages in comparison with face-to-face interaction.

For one thing, socializing online enables people to maintain friendships that might otherwise be lost. This may refer to someone who has moved away, someone who becomes ill, or someone who is unable to meet face to face for whatever reason. For another, many people turn to the Internet as a tool with which to socialize with their friends because it is not time or place sensitive. In other words, people can communicate with their friends any time and any place. This is particularly important when they want to tell their friends about something very urgent. Meeting friends up in the local community, however, does not enjoy these advantages.

For all the advantages that online socializing has to offer, it can never really replace human contact. The basic reason behind is that humans are social animals and they love getting around with people, particularly with friends. Nothing can beat the feelings of walking together, playing games, doing sports, going for picnics and excursions or short trips. There are times when friends must shun smartphones for a while, do away with interacting on virtual social networking platforms, and get down to real things in life, face to face. To build friendships, indeed, the quantity of digital interaction does not equal the quality of face-to-face interaction.

As a conclusion, with clear advantages and disadvantages of the two modes of interaction, friends can alternatively socialize with one another face to face and via the Internet. Socializing online, however popular it can be, cannot play the same role as human contact. Therefore, face-to-face interaction will never go out of fashion.

雅思写作高分范文解析

本范文没有过多的背景介绍,直接提出话题并亮出自己的观点:两种社交方法各有利弊。这决定了本文即将采取“双边讨论”的论证结构。

第二段讨论网络社交的两个优势(与不能见面的人保持友谊;网络社交不受时空限制)。注意本段最后一句,就是明确网络社交的这两个优势是与线下交往相比较而言的。

第三段讨论线下交往的优势,采用说理的方式。人是社会性动物,喜欢和朋友一起,然后举例说明人类在一起喜欢做那些活动,最后总结(网络社交数量虽多,却不及面对面交往的质量)。

结论段,再次明确重申观点。好的结尾段应该包括两个内容:一是对前文的总结,二是适当的延伸。因此,好作文的结尾段通常都是2-3句话组成。

雅思写作高分表达

When it comes to... 当谈到......(后接名词或动名词)

Something of the past 过去的事物

In comparison with... 与......相比

For one thing..., for another... 首先......;其次......

Sensitive 敏感的

For all 尽管;虽然(= in spite of)

Shun 避免(= avoid)

Do away with 扔掉;抛弃

Virtual 虚拟的

Get down to... 认真做......

Alternatively 有选择地

Via 通过

Go out of fashion 过时

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