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2017年10月5日雅思写作考试真题回忆

2017年10月11日14:12 来源:小站教育
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摘要:2017年10月5日雅思考试已经结束,小站教育教学研发中心王泓森老师和邹舒老师为大家带来最新,最快,最全的考试回忆。范文来自范钰红老师!

2017105 雅思写作范文解析

 

大作文

类型

旅游类

题目

 

 

It is not necessary for people to travel to other places to learn about the culture from other people. We can learn as much as from books, films and Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

范文解析

本文属于国际旅行类话题。论点可涉及到文化类话题中的传统风俗等内容。考生在论点思考步骤中应该能够顺利想到亲身体验这个核心点,进而延伸到体验内容(即上文提及的传统风俗和当地美食)。但是在论述过程中,尤其是传统风俗方面最好能够举出具体的例子,从而使得抽象的论点具有说服力。这就需要考生在备考过程中积累相关的素材了。

文章结构

paragraph 1 :结合时代背景引入话题。

paragraph 2: 论述书本中的文字和电影中的画面无法与真实的场景相比拟。

paragraph 3: 论述出国旅游在了解异国风俗以及品尝美食方面的优势。

paragraph 4: 总结上文论点,强调自己的观点。

高分话题表达(范文中已用红色标注)

depicte

v. 描述

ethic standard

n. 道德标准

exotic culture

adj. 外来文化

first-hand experience

n. 第一手经验

be liken to…

相比

natural wonders

自然奇观

in many respects

在许多方面

be immersed in

沉浸于

traditional customs

传统习俗

priest

牧师

ritual

仪式

the solemn atmosphere

庄严的气氛

sincere beliefs

真诚的信仰

cuisine

料理

broaden visitors’ horizons

扩大游客的眼界

enlightening

有启发作用的

高分结构(范文中已用蓝色标注)

In consequence, some people support the assertion that…

因此,有些人主张

I disagree with this assertion as it underestimates the importance of…

我不同意这个主张因为这忽略了的重要性

To commence with…

首先

It is an unparalleled chance to…

一个前所未有的机会

Under such circumstance...

在这种情况下

范文

Globalization and internet create conditions for widening international exchanges of books and films, in which the way of life is depicted and the ethic standards is conveyed. In consequence, some people support the assertion that there is no need for us to travel abroad to learn exotic culture. Personally speaking, however, I disagree with this assertion as it underestimates the importance of first-hand experience.

 

To commence with, the books and movies can never replace the real places. No matter how vivid the scenes are, they are merely images and words and can never be liken to historical sites or natural wonders that tourists see in real or even might be allowed to touch with their fingers. The difference can be compared to seeing the picture of a mango rather than eating it.

 

In addition, paying a visit to foreign countries is a rewarding experience in many respects. For one thing, it is an unparalleled chance to be immersed in the extoic traditional customs. Take my experience as an example. When I visited the kasuga Shrine in Nara ( a city in Japan), a wedding ceremony was being hold in the temple.

 

The priest hosted the ritual in the name of God, expressing the blessing meanwhile the new couple were required to blow deeply to the divinity. As a viewer, I was so impressed by the solemn atmosphere and sincere beliefs. For another thing, to taste local cuisine is a great joy for foodies. Despite the fact that travelers have access to foreign dishes in their own countries, seldom can they savor an authentic flavor due to several factors such as the freshness of ingredients and chef’s cooking skills. Under such circumstance, it is hard for them to appreciate the glamour of traditional food culture.

 

In conclusion, all these broaden visitors’ horizons and enable them to experience something refreshing and enlightening. Conversely, the passive activity of seeing something in paper or on screens fails to satisfy people’s demands of being involved in the exploration and learning of appealing cultures of alien countries.

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