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【口语高分范文】雅思口语Part2 educational television program9分范文分享

2016年01月21日11:55 来源:互联网
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摘要:为什么别人的口语拿高分,自己的成绩始终在原地踏步?本文跟大家分享一篇part 2 Describe an educational television program that you liked的9分范文,并分析了范文里出现的亮点,跟大家分享,一起看看别人的口语好在哪里!

很多同学反映口语Part2有些话题很难有头绪,so,这里跟大家分享一篇9分口语范文Describe an educational television program that you liked,一起来看看吧!

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Describe an educational television program that you liked.

You should say

– what the program was about

– when and where you saw it

– how you found out about this program

– and why you liked it

I’m going to talk about one of my favorite educational TV programs, which is a nature documentary called ‘Planet Earth’. There were eleven episodes of this program, and each one featured a different habitat on Earth, such as mountains, caves, deserts and jungles. The aim of the ‘Planet Earth’ series was to take the viewer into those habitats, using spectacular footage of interesting animals, plants and landscapes.

首句定语从句可谓先声夺人。高分词汇(其实都是简单词汇):episode, feature, habitat, take..into, spectacular footage, landscapes. 三句话分别讲了这个节目的基本信息,主要内容形式和节目的宗旨,可以说完美地回答了what the program was about.

I first saw ‘Planet Earth’ on television when it was broadcast by the BBC several years ago. I think it was shown every Sunday evening, which was the perfect time to watch a fascinating nature program. Then, a few years a ago, somebody bought me the DVD box set of the whole series as a Christmas present, and I watched the episodes again.

对于task response可以说很全面了,既有喜闻乐见,普普通通的前2句(还有模板的可能),又有最后1句的点睛,不经意间就讲了一个关于自己的圣诞礼物的故事,从而与模板性的答案完全划清了界限。

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I found out about this TV programme because it was advertised repeatedly in the weeks before it was first aired. The TV trailers were really eye-catching because they showed incredibly beautiful images of nature. I also recognised the voice of the narrator of the programme, the well-known naturalist David Attenborough. It was these trailers that persuaded me to watch the first episode.

found out about一定要注意是“找到,搞清楚”意思,不是让你评价这个节目(how do you think of…)。如果说前2段还只是小试牛刀,那么这一段开始,就是火力全开,开始了9分英语的狂飙了。4句话全部为复杂句,分别涉及到了because状语从句,because状语从句,同位语,强调句(it is…that…)。当然,学术口语中,原本就应该达到这用程度地表达。而细看词汇,当然也不简单,有air, narrator, naturalist, trailer等。不过整体而言,用词很简明,没有任何炫技的成分。

What I liked most about the ‘Planet Earth’ series was its stunning photography and its global scope. For example, in the “Fresh Water” episode, they showed us the giant salamander in Japan, crocodiles in the river Nile, and river dolphins in the Amazon. I was amazed at how they had managed to film such interesting creatures in so many locations. I enjoyed learning about strange animal species, and the programme opened my eyes to the hidden wonders of our planet.

此段,旨在让回答有血有肉,所以用了详略恰当的例子来说明了why you liked it. 结尾的表达简明有力,让人折服。高分词汇:stunning photography, global scope, opened my eyes, hidden wonders.

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