实例讲解雅思写作开头技巧一个主题7种写法

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摘要：今天，小站教育利用一道雅思写作考试题，来实例分析一下各种不同的写法会造成怎么样的效果。各位备考的考生也可以看看自己的写作差距在哪里。

Throughout the history, male leaders often made the society more violent and conflicting. If women governed the world, it would be a more peaceful world. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give an example to support your idea.

上面是一篇雅思写作的题目，今天，小站就利用这个题目来分别讲解一下各种不同的开头写作技巧，从低分到高分，从简单高复杂，考生也可以了解一下，自己的开头和高分比起来，差距到底在哪里。

模式一： 3句式 rephrase the title + quote others' opinions + make one's own point clear

如果用一个好的句式，则可以写成：Recently there has been a hot debate in the public over the issue whether the world would be more peace if women governed the world.

如果用动词变化和连词连接观点，则可以写成：Some people believe that women would be better governors while other people couldn't agree.

如果选择常规的提出自己的观点，如果现在还没有明确的观点，可以课程：I will analyze the two opinions and then give my own point of view.

模式二：可以从world governor 或者man/ woman作为切入点，避免直接谈到话题，而是“后退一步”从话题的部分内容中切入，如：

It's generally agreed that women are more considerate and patient than men. However, would the world be more peaceful if women were the governor of the world? Personally, I believe that women are better governors than men.

Undoubtedly, women and men should be treated equally. However, when it comes to governing the world, it seems that most of the governors are males just as the word "history" indicates history is "his story", not "her story". In my point of view, women would make better governors if given the chance.

模式三：可以考虑抛开背景知识，采用其他的开篇手法，虽然难度可能更大一点。

At the mere mention of women governing the world, most of us may naturally form an unrealistic picture of a more peaceful world where the sun always shines. The other side of the picture, however, is just to the opposite.

Have you ever considered why the world should be governed by males most of the time? Has it ever occurred to you that women might make more competent leaders and the world would be more peaceful under their leadership? I sincerely believe that women could at least make equally capable leaders as men if not better.

Sometimes while looking back on the trip, one may find that seemingly the road has always been bumpy and muddy and sadly the driver has been a man most of the time. Some people may therefore come to a misunderstanding that it is the man driver who has made the voyage uncomfortable and even miserable. It is the same case when it comes to the human being's history. I sincerely believe that whether the society is more violent and conflicting may not have a close relationship with the gender of the leader.