Simon老师高分雅思范文系列--school buildings answer
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很多的备考雅思的考生都在学习Simon的范文，他的范文走的是完全的平民路线，看其遣词造句，貌似平平，其实是大有丘壑，有我们这些为了雅思写作7分都在苦苦求索的人所不具有的用最精简的用词，最少的篇幅讲明白一个观点的大能力。他的范文经常是雅思写作的老师推荐的材料。请看Simon老师的图表小作文范文。
The diagrams below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school site in 2024.
范文：
The two pictures compare the layout of a school as it was in the year 2004 with a proposed site design for the year 2024.
It is clear that the main change for 2024 involves the addition of a new school building. The school will then be able to accommodate a considerably larger number of students.
In 2004, there were 600 pupils attending the school, and the two school buildings were separated by a path running from the main entrance to the sports field. By 2024, it is expected that there will be 1000 pupils, and a third building will have been constructed. Furthermore, the plan is to join the two original buildings together, creating a shorter path that links the buildings only.
As the third building and a second car park will be built on the site of the original sports field, a new, smaller sports field will need to be laid. A new road will also be built from the main entrance to the second car park. Finally, no changes will be made to the main entrance and original car park.
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