Simon老师高分雅思范文系列--age distribution answer

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摘要：雅思考官Simon应该大多数备考过一段时间的雅思考生都有所耳闻。他的雅思大小作文范文是受坊间追捧的必备写作资料，但是即使是在如此的高能辅助下，为何众人的雅思写作分数一直还是低分飘过呢？

很多的备考雅思的考生都在学习Simon的范文，他的范文走的是完全的平民路线，看其遣词造句，貌似平平，其实是大有丘壑，有我们这些为了雅思写作7分都在苦苦求索的人所不具有的用最精简的用词，最少的篇幅讲明白一个观点的大能力。他的范文经常是雅思写作的老师推荐的材料。请看Simon老师的图表小作文范文。

The charts below compare the age structure of the populations of France and India in 1984

Sample answer

The two charts compare the populations of France and India in terms of age distribution by gender in the year 1984.

It is clear that the population of India was younger than that of France in 1984, with a noticeably larger proportion of people aged under 20. France, on the other hand, had a significantly larger percentage of elderly inhabitants.

In India, close to 14% of people were aged 5 or under, and each five-year age bracket above this contained an increasingly smaller proportion of the population. France’s population, by contrast, was more evenly distributed across the age ranges, with similar figures (around 7% to 8% of all people) for each five-year cohort between the ages of 0 and 40. Somewhere between 10% and 15% of all French people were aged 70 or older, but the equivalent figure for India was only 2%.

Looking more closely at gender, there was a noticeably higher proportion of French women than men in every cohort from age 50 upwards. For example, almost 3% of French 70- to 75-year-olds were women, while just under 2% were men. No significant gender differences can be seen on the Indian population chart.

(199 words, band 9)The bar chart compares the amount of time spent by people in the UK on three different types of phone call between 1995 and 2002.

It is clear that calls made via local, fixed lines were the most popular type, in terms of overall usage, throughout the period shown. The lowest figures on the chart are for mobile calls, but this category also saw the most dramatic increase in user minutes.

In 1995, people in the UK used fixed lines for a total of just over 70 billion minutes for local calls, and about half of that amount of time for national or international calls. By contrast, mobile phones were only used for around 4 billion minutes. Over the following four years, the figures for all three types of phone call increased steadily.

By 1999, the amount of time spent on local calls using landlines had reached a peak at 90 billion minutes. Subsequently, the figure for this category fell, but the rise in the other two types of phone call continued. In 2002, the number of minutes of national / international landline calls passed 60 billion, while the figure for mobiles rose to around 45 billion minutes.

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