2016年4月2日雅思写作真题大作文7分范文

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4月2日的雅思写作大作文要求我们写关于多种族文化利弊的文章。习惯了中式教育的学生马上就会说，多种族人生活在一起可以促进民族大团结，促进社会和平与稳定，可以相互交流，取长补短。只要按照这种思路，7分段或以下的同学一定傻眼，写不下去!为什么?因为这些东西都难以用英语来表达!在这种时候，我们可以用策略：把抽象的思维转换成简易的、日常的、琐碎的汉语，然后再用英语来表达。一起来看看范文吧！

2016年4月2日雅思写作真题大作文范文汇总

Task：

Multicultural societies, where people of different ethnic groups live together, can bring more benefits than drawbacks to a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

多元文化的社会，不同种族的人生活在一起，能给一个国家带来更多的利益。你在多大程度上同意或不同意这句话?

写作思路：

引入段：今天，越来越多来自不同民族的人生活在一起，这种多文化社会是好还是坏，人们有不同的意见。

好处段：(1)赞同多种族社会的人认为它有两个好处。首先，如果一个社会是多种族的，他们就能够相互学习别人的文化。这就意味着，他们就更有机会相互体验对方的风俗习惯，了解对方的思维方式，从而扩大自己对世界的理解。其次，多种族的人生活在一起，就更能相互理解和包容，这无疑会让这个世界更加和平。比如，我居住的小区里就既有中国人，也有印度人，还有来自非洲的朋友。春节的时候，我们就邀请他们来我家体验中国人如何过春节;而印度朋友教会了我们如何打板球，非洲的朋友则教我们怎样跳他们那种很有节奏感的舞蹈。因此，我们这个小区的生活氛围非常和谐，充满了欢乐。

坏处段：(2)反对多种族的人认为不同种族生活在一起也可能导致问题。如果一个种族只认为自己的方式是正确的，而不尊重别人的方式，那么就可能导致矛盾。比如，中国人喜欢很多人一起聚会，并弄出很大的声音来，这对于更喜欢安静的西方人来说，可能是无法忍受的。同样，如果一个印度佛教徒看到邻居在宰杀鸡鱼，也可能感到非常不舒服。如果这些中国人、西方人和印度人不能相互理解，他们就可能相互仇恨，最终产生更严重的后果。

结论段：(3)虽然多种族文化可能因为误解而导致一些问题，但我认为，多种族人生活在一起，可以相互交流，交互分享，最终会更相互理解。这种情况显然比文化分离更有利于社会的和平和稳定。

Sample answer:

Today, more and more people from different cultural backgrounds live together. Opinions are divided on whether this is a positive or negative development.

Those who support the idea believe that multi-cultural societies can bring about at least two benefits. In the first place, as they argue, if a society is multi-cultural, people can learn from each other. This means they have more opportunities to experience each other's unique customs and life styles and understand their ways of thinking, thus gaining a better understanding of the world. More significantly, living with people of different ethnic groups will enable us to become more understanding and tolerant, which is, of course, very important to a peaceful world. In my neighborhood, for example, there are people from China, India and Africa. During Chinese New Year Holidays, we invite our Indian and African friends to our house and show them how Chinese people spend their Spring Festival. Our Indian neighbors teach us how to play cricket, which is their national sports and African friends show us the beautiful dances particular to their culture. In this way, we share what we have and learn what we do not, and our neighborhood is always happy and full of joy.

Those who do not like multi-cultural societies argue that some problems may arise in such societies. If people stick to their own ways of doing things and refuse to respect other cultures, there will be conflicts among people. To cite just one example. Many Chinese people love noisy parties and gatherings, but this is completely unacceptable to many Westerners who are more quiet in nature. Similarly, when an Indian believing in Buddhism finds his Chinese neighbor killing a fish , he may also feel very uncomfortable. If these people from different cultural backgrounds live together without showing respect to their neighbor's habit and religion, they may eventually hate each other and more serious consequences may follow.

Despite of the problems that may arise from the multi-cultural societies, I still think such societies are more attractive. When people from different cultural backgrounds interact together, they can share, they can learn from each other, and they can understand each other better. This situation is definitely more favorable for the world's stability and peace than making people live separately.（380 words）