2016年4月16日最新雅思写作真题大作文参考范文（小站名师版）
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2016年4月16日最新的雅思写作大作文考了关于城市化发展的话题，用的观点式的提问方式。There are more new towns nowadays. It is more important to include public parks and sports facilities than shopping centers for individuals to spend their free time. 问我们多大程度上同意/不同意这样的观点，一起来看本文的范文！
Task：
When new towns are planned, it is important to build more public parks or sports facilities than shopping centers for people to spend their free time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Sample Answer:
What weighs heavier in the urban development, the public parks and the sports facilities or the shopping centers? In the essay, the merits of both parties will be fully explored.
On the one hand, building public gardens and athletic facilities brings the community several benefits. One is that there will be more greeneries absorbing carbon dioxide and releasing oxygen, which means that the new towns will be undeniably more eye-pleasing and the dwellers will have much cleaner and fresher air to breathe. Another advantage is that a healthy lifestyle is promoted with these outdoor installations. Most of a town’s workforce is composed of white-color workers who usually lead a sedentary life in front of computers. Given a much more user-friendly environment for exercisers, these office ladies and gentlemen will stroll with families after having meals and release pressures in a positive way.
On the other hand, the local inhabitants are able to avail themselves of the constructions of the shopping malls. To begin with, life is made much more convenient by various shops and stores on the streets. When a person needs to buy necessities such as a piece of clothing, a loaf of bread, and a bottle of shampoo or just wants to have a cup of Starbucks, a manicure and a hairdressing, it is unnecessary for him to drive a long way to the nearest department store. Besides, clusters of big-box stores, supercenters, and strip malls require a large number of salesmen, cleaning crew and managers, which creates job opportunities for the local residents. Those who are former unemployed can make a contribution or even become the bread earners of their families. To be more optimistic, the new town can be shaped into another Singapore, Hong Kong or Paris, developing its economy by drawing worldwide tourists to visit and purchase articles of luxury such as Cartier watches, LV bags, and Chanel cosmetics.
In conclusion, external exercise equipment will yield robust denizens in both objective and subjective ways while internal shopping conditions allow them to enjoy a prosperous economy. To maximize the edges of both sides necessitates rational planning of overall arrangement rather than biased comparison of superiority.
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