雅思口语话题part2高分范文an achievement that you are proud of骄傲的成就

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摘要：为大家带来雅思口语part2事件类话题范文：Describe an achievement that you are proud of 傲人成就，范文由高分考生原创，主题是：我的减肥之旅。在雅思考试中，雅思口语回答，是需要一些核心的词汇、正确句型、以及良好的表达心态。这样我们才能言之有物，有话可说。话不多说范文自取。

本期奉上雅思口语话题题库part2范文：骄傲的成就(Describe an achievement that you are proud of)，范文为高分考生所作，有关一次成功的减肥经历。友情提示：考生应该尽量避免传统的背诵套句或者是模版的口语学习方式，去学习口语范文中地道的词组搭配以及英美人士的思维方式，更加关注词组和逻辑思维两个层面。另外，就是要从扣题角度出发，看优秀范文如何从扣题的方面来展开口语话题。戳红色文字链接，查看范文详情。

Describe an achievement that you are proud of

You should say:

What it was

How it was made

What difficulties have you encountered during the process

Why you are proud of this achievement

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回归：雅思口语part2话题范文汇总——骄傲的成就（an achievement that you are proud of）

1.适用人群：瘦身达人

2.主题：减肥经历

3.故事线：在6个月的时间里成功瘦身，不仅苗条了而且也更加健康

Well, it's probably difficult to believe but last year I knocked off X kilos in about 6 months, and this is what I am still enormously proud of. I have to confess...I used to be a very lazy girl who loved fast food and hated sports. And at that time I was so slim that I didn't even think that one day being overweight would become my number 1 problem. So when I realised that I'd put on X kilos, I decided to lose weight and get fit, no matter what.

And so it began. I started exercising daily. I went jogging in the mornings and I walked in the evenings. Also, I ditched junk food and stopped buying snacks, which I couldn't live without. I started sticking to a diet. You know, no sweets, no rice, no cheeseburgers, and French fries. Not only salads, vegetables, fruits and plenty of fluids. I ate only healthy food and drank a lot of water daily. I cooked foods in healthier ways such as boiling, baking and stewing. I read somewhere that it is better to have a few light meals instead of on main meal. So I followed this advice too. I continued this practice for six straight months. As a result, I lost more than X kilograms.

Now I'm not only as slim as I used to be, but I'm also fit enough. And I'm genuinely proud of my achievement. I should say it was hard to change my habits, my diet and my lifestyle, and at some point I was about to give up because all those activities were really time consuming. But I didn't, thank God, though I was facing a lot of difficulties. Another thing that makes me feel inordinately proud of myself is that I achieved great results without anybody's help. I just read blogs and forums, used a lot of online resources, but it was I that decided what to do with myself. This is something I never thought I could do. You can't even imagine how much effort I put in achieving this result. I would even say I was fighting the battle of my life. And I won.

4.高分口语语料

地道用词：knocked off

enormously

be overweight

lose weight

stick to

boiling, baking and stewing

高分句型： And at that time I was so slim that I didn't even think that one day being overweight would become my number 1 problem.

I just read blogs and forums, used a lot of online resources, but it was I that decided what to do with myself.

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