雅思口语话题part2参考范文之：被污染的地方

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摘要：为大家带来2018年5-8月雅思口语新题预测之：被污染的地方，范文由高分考生原创，内容有关被污染的旅游胜地。范文用词地道，表达流畅，从优秀的口语范文中寻找地道的口语语料，为你所用，在考场上自然流畅地表达，口语7分不在话下。

2018年5-8月雅思口语part2新题预测之：被污染的地方(a place you visited has been affected by pollution)，范文为高分考生原创，内容有关：去年，我和我的两个朋友去拜访(……在你的城市/国家……的地区名称)，我以为我们会喜欢我们的旅行。我们听老师说这是一个游览的好地方，然后我们打算去那里。令人惊讶的是，这个地方受到了严重的污染，于是我们迅速回家了。。口语水平的提高需要一段很长时间积累的过程，所以找对口语范文很关键。学习模仿雅思口语范文要点有3：1.native speaker的地道用词，2.丰富灵活的动词，3.高分句型并熟练背诵之。话不多说，口语范文自取：

Describe a place you visited has been affected by pollution

You should say:

• What the place is

• What type of pollution it is/ are

• Cause and effect of pollution

and explain how can this pollution be controlled.

1.适用考生：全适用

2.主题：旅行地污染

3.故事线：去年，我和我的两个朋友去拜访(……在你的城市/国家……的地区名称)，我以为我们会喜欢我们的旅行。我们听老师说这是一个游览的好地方，然后我们打算去那里。令人惊讶的是，这个地方受到了严重的污染，于是我们迅速回家了。

雅思口语高分范文示例：

Last year I went to visit (...say an area name in your city/country...)with two of my friends and thought we would enjoy our trip. We heard from a teacher that this was a beautiful place to visit and after that, we planned to go there. To our surprise, this place was severely affected by the pollution and instead of enjoying our trip, we cut it short and returned home immediately.

It was early summer last year and visiting a place near a river which is surrounded by natural beauty and recommended by one of our favourite teachers was an excellent idea, at least at that time. I am sure the teacher who suggested this place had no idea about the severity of the pollution there and how things have become worse.

The water pollution was quite severe there and the black and greasy elements that were floating on the water created a shocking scene. Uncontrolled waste management, toxic elements from factories and industries, motorised vehicles running on the water and the lack of proper maintenance of the riverside are the main reasons the water has got polluted. More shockingly, the air pollution was also noticeable. I saw many industries and factories that were exhausting black fumes and that has made the air polluted more than any other part I know about.

Uncontrolled urbanisation, the establishment of new factories & industries without proper planning, lack of strict policy and corruption in government offices are so far the main reasons for increasing pollution in our country. I wish this will stop and we will be conscious enough not to destroy our own inhabitants.

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