雅思写作评分细则之6.5分的雅思作文分别是什么样的？

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摘要：之前为大家介绍过雅思6分作文，今天，我们再上一个台阶，为大家结合写作的评分细则介绍一下多数英联邦院校要求的保底成绩——雅思6.5分作文。

雅思6.5分作文作为申请英联邦院校的一个起点成绩，对于急需雅思成绩的考生来说，可以作为短期的参考及目标。那么6.5分的雅思作文具体是什么样的呢？我们结合雅思写作的评分细则一起来看一看以下这篇小作文。
TASK 1篇
6.5分雅思作文是这样的
TASK 1题目：

The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999.

图表分析：
Females＞Males
• 从图标表可以看出，在Undergraduate diploma和Bachelor‘s degree的获得率中，女生的比例要大于男生，其中女生的比例分别占到70%和55%，虽然Bachelor‘s degree的获得率上，女生的优势略微。
Females＜Males
• 在Skilled vocational diploma, Postgraduate diploma, Master degree得到的情况来看，这三面男生远超女生，尤其是Skilled vocational diploma，男生占90%，女生只占10%，其他两个指标，男生分别占到70%和60%。

例文：
The chart gives information about post-school qualifications in terms of the different levels of further education reached by men and women in Australia in 1999.
开门见山，介绍图表展示的内容。阐明了图表中的时间、地点、对象。
We can see immediately that there were substantial differences in the proportion of men and women at different levels. The biggest gender difference is at the lowest post-school level, where 90% of those who held a skilled vocational diploma were men, compared with only 10% of women. By contrast, more women held undergraduate diplomas (70%) and marginally more women reached degree level (55%).
第二段写出柱状图中的差异，即不同性别在不同受教育程度的差异。第一个明显差异是在专科教育程度，男性所占比例远远高于女性。
At the higher levels of education, men with postgraduate diplomas clearly outnumbered their female counterparts (70% and 30%, respectively), and also constituted 60% of Master's graduates.
第二个明显差异是研究生及以上受教育程度，男性所占比率均远高于女性。
Thus we can see that more men than women hold qualifications at the lower and higher levels of education, while more women reach undergraduate diploma level than men. The gender difference is smallest at the level of Bachelor's degree, however.
最后总结以上的两点差异，指出所有受教育程度中性别间差异最小的是学士学位。