雅思写作7分之路第一站——引人入胜的导入段的多重写法

2016年02月17日14:06 来源：小站教育作者：小站雅思编辑

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构成：引言段 + 主体段 + 结论段

一、引言段

组成：开头句(Opening sentence)+ 中心论点 步骤：引入话题，同义转述，再根据写作任务表达中心论点

I、Opening sentence 五种方法:

(一)、引人入胜 思路：用一个比较有趣的话题先吊起考官的胃口，并吸引他们往下看

题目 1：Many schools demand the students to wear uniforms. Some people think that such a practice can undermine their personality and individuality.

范文：

The issue of whether the practice of requiring students to wear

school uniforms will affect their personality and individuality is of great interest to many people.

备选：

Be of great concern for many parents

„引起父母的关注

Be of great importance to many scientists

„对科学家来说至关重要

Be of great significance to both A and B

„对于 A 和 B 都是非常重要的

题目 2.：人类如何定义和追求幸福，这样的问题引起公众广泛的争议。 范文：

The question of how human beings can define and pursue happiness is a matter of much contention among the general public.

备选：

The question of _____________ has been widely debate in the world of politics.

(二)、力排众议 思路：先驳斥大众的某个普遍但却错误的观念，指出其与现实不符，然后提出自己的想法 或正确想法，并在主体段列举各种理由、证据以及活生生和例子来论证。

套路：Although it is + 副词 + 过去分词 + that „.，this is „....

题目 1：The older generations have very traditional ideas about the correct ways of life, thinking and behavior. However, some people think that these ideas are not helpful for the young generations to prepare for modern life.

范文 1：

Although it is commonly believed that conventional views about a healthy lifestyle and proper conduct are no longer to young people’s needs today, this is actually not the case.

题目 2：越来越少人照看年老的亲属，而是把他们送到专业人士那边去。

范文 2：Although many people subscribe to the belief that their old relatives can be taken better care of in a nursing home, this is in fact a common misconception that we need to clear up. From my point of view,

it is the younger family members who should really be responsible for looking after these old people during the rest of their lives.

释义： ①普遍认为„，但事实并非如下。

Although it is commonly believed that „, this is actually not the case.

②许多人认同这样的观点„，但事实上这却是一种我们需要去澄清的普遍错误观念。 Although many people subscribe to the belief that „., this is in fact a common misconception that we need to clear up.

③大众观念认为„.，但是现实状况却远比这种观念复杂得多。

Although conventional wisdom has it that„., the reality of the situation is often far more complicated than that.

释义：

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