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盘点雅思写作中10大“开头跪”写法

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摘要:万事开头难,雅思写作也这样。基本上考官从开口就能判断出你的英文实力。很多人一提笔就跪了。开头段,开头句奠定了考官对你水平的预估,你的写作分数就落入了某个区间了。一起来看看10大开头跪的写作方法吧,如果你也不行中枪,只能说自求多福了,啊不,是赶紧改正啊!

雅思写作开头难,个人认为是难在如何衔接导入到你的观点上,因为这里会暴露你的英文能力。老实说,第一印象真的很重要,一个破破烂烂的开头,你还有看接下来内容的心情吗?一起来看看那些影响人“读欲”的10大开头吧!

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一:啰啰嗦嗦,说不到重点

典型失败案例: Topic 1-Should college students be allowed to get married?

This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……

修改方案:开门见山 直奔主题

In my opinion, it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married。

Topic 2-Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information? (雅思真题)

Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life.

Topic 3-The importance of environmental protection

Oh, this topic is surely very important. Isn’t it? Of course! It’s really very very important!

二:中式英文人见人恨

典型失败案例:Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life

In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……

Topic 2- The population problem

The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.

Topic3- Is there fairness in today’s business world?

I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chopped when I go out buy things……

Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person

Being a nice person have many advantage. I believe if a people always do bad things, he will get “baoying”.

三:观点模糊态度不明

典型失败案例: Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little, only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……

四:偏离主题不知所云

典型失败案例:Topic-It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? (雅思真题)

I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English, music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places.

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