2017年6月17日雅思写作考试真题范文 大学生数量
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本场雅思写作话题：Some people think a country benefits from a large proportion of young people university educated, but others think sending young people to universities only leads to graduate unemployment. discuss both views and give your own opinion.越来越多的人接受大学教育，有益还是有弊？
真题传送门：2017全年雅思写作真题范文大汇总（第一时间更新）
行文思路：
本篇文章是一篇教育类和社会类话题结合的考题，注意题目要求是discuss both views,因此决定了无论支持哪种观点，双方观点都必须讨论到。
范文中第一段直接提出了作者的观点，很多学生上大学会让国家获益良多。紧接着第二段论述了为什么有些人觉得这样会导致失业——供求不匹配，高校培养了太多具备专业知识的人才而社会需要的人才种类是多种多样的，比如很多工作是对知识及技能要求不高的。
但是紧接着转折驳倒了这一点，失业现象只是暂时的，社会对人才的需求结构也是在不断调整的，社会在发展，单纯需要体力劳动的工作在日益减少，更多的工作需要知识和技能，而这正是在大学里重点培养的。
文中第三段则是从正面论述了为什么很多人上大学对国家有益——促进经济发展。学生在大学中不仅学习理论知识，更是在这个学习的过程中锻炼了自己各方面的能力，如果有一支各方面综合素质都很强的劳动力队伍，必然促进企业高效运营，进而促进国整体经济发展。
最后一段用一个让步状语从句既总结了全文论述的两方面内容，又表达了自己的观点倾向，从长远来看，这种发展是对国家有好处的。
范文
Some people hold the opinion that if a great many youth attend college, it will make contribution to the whole nation. However, others argue that this will only give rise to a low employment rate. In my opinion, a country is likely to benefit enormously from this trend.
Some people may worry that there are so many graduates with specialized knowledge that there are no enough positions for them. As we know, the demand of job market is diversified, ranging from non-skilled workers to experts. However, with the progress of society, an increasing number of jobs require more mental work rather than manual work. For example, in the past, numerous workers are needed in the assembly line but now, with the assist of machines, only a few workers who can handle the machines are enough. Consequently, unemployment will not be a problem in the future.
Instead of being a problem, the students completing a degree will boost the development of economy. The university provides a place where students can not only acquire academic knowledge but also enhance their comprehensive skills and qualities. Studying can be an arduous and complex process, from which students can learn skills like critical thinking skills, problem-solving skills and so on. As a result, if a considerable number of students go to college, it will provide the job market with a high-quality workforce and companies are likely to run more efficiently with better human resource.
In conclusion, while some graduates may face the dilemma of unemployment in the short term, this trend tends to contribute to economic prosperity in the long run.
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