2017年11月25日雅思写作真题原创高分范文

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摘要：为大家带来2017年11月25雅思写作高分范文，本场写作真题为社会类话题，真题是：As major cities around the world are growing fast and many problems occur. 随着城市的快速发展，年轻人面临着许多的问题，又该如何解决这些问题？本范文来自小站原创。

为大家带来2017年11月25场的雅思写作高分范文，本范文为小站原创。题目为：As major cities around the world are growing fast and many problems occur. What are the problems that young people live in cities are caused by continued growth? What solutions do you suggest?本题是老题回归，为2014年9月真题，讨论的是大城市的快速发展给年轻人带来的问题以及解决方法，属于报告类型题目。注意此类文章需要两个问题回应完整，文章结构中问题和解决方法要区分清晰，提出的方法和问题一一对应。

1.小站原创雅思范文：

With the relentless march of urbanization in many countries，a string of problems related to young adults who are resident in metropolises should not be ignored. In this essay, the prominent problems and some solutions will be expounded.

Joblessness is widely regarded as one of the primary issues. Nowadays, an increasing number of young people migrate to megacities for convenient life and abundant public resources. However, fierce job competition could also be fueled by this migration and many young people may be afflicted with unemployment. For example, those who fail to possess advanced skills and higher academic qualifications may find it hard to compete in the job market. As there are sometimes hundreds of applicants for one position in a company, young people lacking experience are more likely to be eliminated, resulting in the rising unemployment rate in super-sized cities. What is more, city dwellers’ deteriorating quality of life is attributable to the rapid development of metropolitan cities. Young adults, especially university graduates, lead a hectic life but earn meager wages, which means that under the extremely high cost of living and the shortage of disposable income, houses become unaffordable and unthinkable for them. As a result, the low living satisfaction brings about mental diseases, such as anxiety and depression.

To mitigate the problems, some measures should be taken. Firstly, information about advanced skills should be available to the youth either from the Internet or universities. Meanwhile, young people need to update knowledge so as to improve their employability. Secondly, it is imperative that the government should provide financial incentives for them. For instance, housing and employment subsidies can release young people’s huge economic pressure, which can help them lead a better life.

In conclusion, in order to survive and thrive in metropolises, young people should be well equipped to grapple with above mentioned problems and support from the government could also alter the status quo.

2.文章结构

P1：引入话题+文章写作目的

P2：从两个方面论证年轻人面临的问题：就业难和生活质量低

P3：从两个角度提出解决方法并和原因一一对应：自我提升，政府补贴

P4：总结：概括问题和方法

3.高分话题表达

joblessness 失业

migrate to megacities 移居大城市

be fueled by 被，，激化

be afflicted with 受….折磨

academic qualifications 学历

is attributable to 归因于