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【原创范文】2018年1月13日雅思A类写作大作文Task 2真题大作文范文

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摘要:为大家带来18年1月13场的雅思A类写作范文,本题为社会类话题,题目为:Employers should not be concerned about the way their employees are dressed at work. They should only care about the quality of their work. 讨论职场上着装和工作素质的关系。范文来自小站原创。

2018年1月13日场的雅思考试已结束,本场雅思写作大作文为社会类话题,题目为:Employers should not be concerned about the way their employees are dressed at work. They should only care about the quality of their work. 话不多说,范文自取:

1.雅思写作大作文范文解析

本题讨论雇主是否应该只注重职员的工作质量,而不是其穿着。题目类型是议论文的一种观点类是To what extant do you agree or disagree类型,可以采用双边讨论,也就是5段式作文。特别需要注意的是,题目中需要重点讨论的是只注重职员的工作质量,而不是为什么雇主不应该注重职员的外表穿着。

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2.1月13场雅思写作真题范文

We now live in a time when people are perhaps more image conscious than ever before due to social media and the influence of airbrushing in everyday life and in the workplace . Therefore, it appears to me that never should employers merely focus on the quality of work, although it is necessary.

Only focusing on the quality of work could indeed boost productivity. For employers, the more productive their employees are, the more profit they will make. In this case, empowering and encouraging employees to improve the quality of work contributes to the greater efficiency and increased income of the company and employers as well. But this also unfortunately takes a heavy toll on the company profitability. For example, when employees wearing casually not formally attend a formal meeting, this will impress colleagues or collaborative partners as a worker who does not show enough respect, thus possibly leading to an unnecessary failure in cooperation.

However, if employers prioritize the output of employees rather than personal, professional appearance, this will also inflict a poor image both on the company and on its employees, especially in service industry. This is mainly because first impressions are crucial in these industries. Wearing a uniform or formal attire not just shows respect for customers and clients, but reveals a high-quality, professional service or products, an effective tactic to gain a positive image as well as customer loyalty. Without it, the image of a company will gradually become worse and meanwhile productivity and profitability will thus decrease as well.

Such unreasonable work style may also pose threats to the shape of employees’ image. Being committed to the quality of work, some employees, workaholics in particular, will spend too much time improving their work performance and then pay less attention to what they should eat, how much they need to exercise and what kind of clothes they had better wear. If this lasts too long, they will suffer a poor self-image and become less confident, particularly in the world where every single individual emphasizes appearance.

In conclusion, irreplaceable as the quality of work is, it is not only driving factor for the development of a company and what employees wear and look in the workplace does matter for customers, employers and themselves.(340 words)范文来自邢睿嬴老师。

3.雅思写作之文章结构

P1:引入话题+表明观点(不同意)

P2:承认只注重工作质量的优势:会给公司带来更多的利润。

P3:指出只注重工作质量的弊端:会使得公司形象受损。

P4:指出只注重工作质量的弊端:会对职员的个人形象造成负面影响。

P5:总结:重申观点

4.雅思写作之高分话题表达

Image conscious 注重个人形象的

Airbrushing 修图

Empower ...to do sth 使能够(enable的同义词)

Impress 留下...的印象

Unnecessary 不必要的

Inflict 使遭受(suffer)

Formal attire 正装

Tactic 策略

Customer loyalty 顾客忠诚度

Self-image 自我形象

irreplaceable 不可取代的

高分结构 the more productive their employees are, the more profit they will make. the more... the more...结构

take a heavy toll on . 对...有负面影响

...,thus possibly leading to an unnecessary failure in cooperation.

非谓语结构做结果状语

not just shows respect for customers and clients, but reveals Not just...but (also)的动词平行

To what they should eat, how much they need to exercise and what kind of clothes they had better wear. 三个宾语从句的平行

irreplaceable as the quality of work is 让步状语从句的倒装

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