雅思8分作文感想--结尾技巧很重要
- 2014年09月29日11:15 来源：小站整理
- 参与（0） 阅读（6096）
招式一、回答问题answer thequestion
E.g. When a country develops its technology; the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In conclusion, without suggesting that all technology is necessarily good, I thinkit is by no means ‘ pointless’, in any way, to try to keep traditions alive with technology. We should not ignore technology, because it can be our friendand support our way of life.
这个结尾段落明确地提出了自己的观点，不是所有的科技都是好的，但是科技也不是完全没有用处的。
招式二、不添加新的信息not apply anynew information
E.g. Happiness is considered to be very important in life.Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness?
Like self-awareness, this is also very difficult to achieve, but I think these are the two factors that may be the most important for achieving happiness.
用1句话明确自己的观点，幸福很难定义，可能有两个因素起到作用。
招式三、2-3个句子为宜 2-3 sentences are enough
E.g. Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational; otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree?
Finally, Ithink it is also important to remember that children need to relax as well as work. If everything they do must have some educational or academic relevance,then they will soon get tired of studying altogether, which is the last thing parents would want.
2句话，作者的态度很明确，学生不可能花所有的时间去学习，否者就会完全失去对学习的兴趣，所以也应该给学生一些放松的时间。
一般在结尾段的最开始部分，考生就应该给考官一个明确的信号词，让考官了解文章已经进入尾声了。这里所谓的信号词就是一些结尾段的套句：
信号词：Finally, to sum up, inconclusion, in brief, therefore, thus, overall
句型：
1. it can be concludedthat…
2. we can findthat…
3. I think itis also important to remember that
4. the mainpoint is to make sure that
5. I believethat/ Personally, I think that/ I would say that/ I agree that/ My view is that
招式四：可采用以下技巧
1.总结式（重述前文）
把前文中的观点再在结尾段进行重述，但是不能重复与开头段或者题目中的单词。
E.g. In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are the cause of this?What solutions can you suggest?
Perhaps parenting classes are needed to help them to do this, and high quality nursery schools could be established that would support families more in terms of rising the next generation. The government should fund this kind of parental support, because this is no longer a problem for individual families, but for society as a whole.
把solutions进行简单的再次描写--父母、好的托儿所、政府的资金扶助。
2.两分式
把文章涉及到的主题人或者物分成两种,对其进行分别的说明。
E.g. In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this ad completely wrong,while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What are your opinions on this?
Nevertheless,in better economic circumstances, few parents would choose to send their children out to full-time paid work. If learning responsibilities and work experience are considered to be important, then children can acquire these by having light, part-time jobs or even doing tasks such as helping their parents around the family home, which are unpaid, but undoubtedly of value in children's development.
对有钱的家庭而言，家长很少送小孩去做童工；如果是为了钱或者其他，可做兼职。
3.折中式
很难判断其中到底谁占据主导地位，或者什么是最重要的，两者是缺一不可的，需共同存在。
E.g. Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life.
Either nature or nurture is the major influence on a person, but that both have powerfuleffects. How these factors interact is still unknown today and they remain largely unpredictable in a person's life.
两者是缺一不可的，天赋和后天培养同等重要。
4.转折对比式
提出另一种群体,与之相比,会产生什么效果来支持自己的观点。
E.g. Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal of more money than people in other important professionals.Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.
Personally, I think that the amount of money such sports stars make is more justified than the huge earnings of movie stars, but at the same time, it indicates that our society places more value on sport than on more essential professions and achievements.
把运动员与其他方面的工作人员进行对比——比上不足比下有余。
总之，如果要写出一篇好的雅思作文一定要善始善终，这才是拿高分的黄金定律，希望考生们能够根据上文的一些建议找到适合自己的结尾方式，得到理想的成绩。
