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17年9-12月雅思口语话题P2范文:an achievement that you are proud of

2017年09月18日11:28 来源:小站教育作者:小站雅思编辑
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摘要:为烤鸭带来2017年9-12月雅思口语题库最新话题的第一手范文,与口语的新题旧恨,请在小站处一笔斩断。本文话题:Describe an achievement that you are proud of。为大家讲述为了减肥的艰辛与成功的励志故事。

新题何足惧,旧恨何其多,手握真题集,屠鸭亦可期。一转眼,雅思口语进入了9-12月的新一轮话题季,小站雅思懂你更懂雅思,第一时间为大家整理出超地道的范文答案,赶紧丧心病狂地开练吧,一切皆有可能,冲7就在此刻了。话题:Describe an achievement that you are proud of (新题)。

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17年9-12月雅思口语话题P2范文:an achievement that you are proud of图1

You should say:

What it was

How it was made

What difficulties have you encountered during the process

Why you are proud of this achievement

参考范文:我的减肥之旅

Well, it's probably difficult to believe but last year i knocked off X killos in about 6 months, and  this is what I am still enormously proud of. I have to confess...I used to be a very lazy girl who loved fast food and hated sports.And at that time I was so slim that i didn't even think that one day being overweight wold become my number 1 problem. So when I realised tha tI'd put on X kilos, I decided to lose weight and get fit, no matter what.

And so it began. I started exercising daily. I went gogging in the mornings and I walked in the evenings. Also, i ditched junk food and stopped buying sancks, whicvh I couldn't live without. I started sticking to a diet. You know, no sweets, no rice, no cheeseburgers, and French fries. Noing. Only salads, vegetables, fruits and plenty of fluids. I ate only healthy food and drank a lot of water daily. I cooked foods in healthier ways such as boiling, baking and stewing. I read somewhere that it is better to have a few light meals instead of on main meal. So i followed this advice too. I continued this practice for six straight months. As a result, I lost more than X kilograms.

Now I'm not only as slim as I used to be, but I'm also fit enough. And I'm genuinely proud of my achievement. I should say it was hard to change my habits, my diet and my lifestyle, and at some point I was about to give up because all those activities were really time consuming. But I didn't, thank God, though I was facing a lot of difficulties. Another thing that makes me feel inordinately proud of myself is that I achieved great results without anybody's help. I just read blogs and forums, used a lo of online resources, but it was I that decided what to do with myself. This is something I never thought I could do. You can't even imagine how much effort I put in achieving this result. I would even say I was fighting the battle of my life. And i won.

相关的观点语料:

what is  achievement?

I became the champion of ...in boxing.

I earned my first money.

i won a scholarship.

i conquered my fear of public speaking/ drowning/ heights

i ran a marathon.

i rescued a stray cat/dog.

i raised a lot of money for charity.

what do you do to achieve it?

I found  a  friend who did it professionally and asked them to help me.

I watched step-by-step video lessons on the internet.

I practice along with video tutorials.

i tried out an online courses.

i read blogs and forums.

I stopped wasting time on irrelevant things.

How easy or difficult was it?

I was pressed for time.

I had neither experience nor money

It took a considerable amount of planning and organisation on my part


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