2016年7月9日雅思考试大作文252词范文

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摘要：7月9日雅思大作文考的是“讨论观点”题型，真题是：In some countries, advertisers increase the amount of advertising which try to persuade children to buy snacks, toys，and other goods. Parents object to such pressure on children. But some advertisers claim that there is useful information in these advertisements. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are many advertisements directed at children, such as snacks, toys and other goods. Parents argue that children are under pressure. Advertisers claim that the advertisements provide useful information. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

在一些国家，广告商增加广告的数量，试图说服孩子们买零食、玩具和其他商品。父母反对给孩子施加这样的压力。但一些广告主声称，这些广告中有有用的信息。讨论两种观点并给出你的意见。

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People today are too often bombarded with various advertisements on television,in newspapers or on the running buses or subways, a large proportion of which are children targeted.

Some people may point out that too much exposure to advertising imposes too much stress on children as well as their parents. The advertisers usually have a deep insight into children's psychology and behaviors which are taken into advantage of in their advertising to make their products. whether a toy, a snack or some other goods, more appealing to the young minds. As a result, the innocent young are very likely to fall prey to the predators and ask them parents to buy whatever is advertised, regardless of the price and the function.

However, advertisers themselves hardly agree with these arguments,claming that the advertisements a re full of useful information. This is true to a certain extent. In some cases, parents tend to choose the right quality products according to what a commercial introduces, especially after careful comparison.

Nevertheless, in some others,quite the revers e is true. That is to say that the information in a commercial is far from helpful but rather harmful because almost kinds of advertising will definitely exaggerate their merits but conceal their demerits.

Overall, I believe that advertising marketed towards children should be strictly examined and controlled by the related authorities because children are the disadvantaged group of people and prone to any tricks and deceits. Also parents should be more discreet when choosing a product from advertisements.

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