【9分作文盛宴】考官华丽雅思小作文详解7：饼状图
- 2015年08月17日15:03 来源：小站教育作者：Phoebe
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Simon是英国曼彻斯特的前雅思考官，由于创办雅思考试学习网站而在全世界的考生中越来越有名气。其网站上提供大量关于复习雅思的技巧以及颠覆性的建议，甚至还有不少Simon本人亲笔写的满分作文。这些满分作文由于出自英国考官之手，非常地道，言简意赅，和中国考生惯用的千篇一律的模板作文相比，着实让人眼前一亮。小站的Phoebe老师深感有义务要让孩子们接触到真正可以提分的好作文，所以以后会频繁地帮大家整理并总结这些满分作文的精华，相信大家都可以扔掉模板，写出高分作文!
今天要讲的是Pie Charts——饼形图。题目如下：
The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries.
看过前几期文章的同学应该都知道Simon写小作文的段落结构：
1. Introduction 2. Overview/Summary 3. Details 4. Details
接下来大家针对这篇文章先思考两个问题：
1. How would you paraphrase the question statement above? 你会如何复述题目？(Introduction)
2. What two main or general points would you choose for the summary?你会选择写哪两个主要信息？(Overview/summary)
大家按照自己的思路写一下文章的前两段，然后和Simon写的做下比较：
The charts compare Korea, Sweden and the UK in terms of the methods used in each country to dispose of harmful waste.
It is clear that in both the UK and Sweden, the majority of dangerous waste products are buried underground. By contrast, most hazardous materials in the Republic of Korea are recycled.
现在大家仔细看图，思考一下哪些Details可以写进后两段。这里是Simon给的6个细节：
1. Looking at the information in more detail, we can see that 82% of the UK’s dangerous waste is put into landfill sites.
2. This disposal technique is used for 55% of the harmful waste in Sweden and only 22% of similar waste in Korea.
3. The latter country recycles 69% of hazardous materials, which is far more than the other two nations.
4. While 25% of Sweden's dangerous waste is recycled, the UK does not recycle at all.
5. Instead, it dumps waste at sea or treats it chemically.
6. These two methods are not employed in Korea or Sweden, which favour incineration for 9% and 20% of dangerous waste respectively.
完整范文：
The charts compare Korea, Sweden and the UK in terms of the methods used in each country to dispose of harmful waste.
It is clear that in both the UK and Sweden, the majority of dangerous waste products are buried underground. By contrast, most hazardous materials in the Republic of Korea are recycled.
Looking at the information in more detail, we can see that 82% of the UK’s dangerous waste is put into landfill sites. This disposal technique is used for 55% of the harmful waste in Sweden and only 22% of similar waste in Korea. The latter country recycles 69% of hazardous materials, which is far more than the other two nations.
While 25% of Sweden's dangerous waste is recycled, the UK does not recycle at all. Instead, it dumps waste at sea or treats it chemically. These two methods are not employed in Korea or Sweden, which favour incineration for 9% and 20% of dangerous waste respectively.
(159 words, band 9)
词汇总结：
dispose：词是disposal，“废弃”
hazardous：英文释意full of risk or danger，有时可与dangerous替换
favour：可作动词，“支持”
respectively：分别地
今天就到这儿，下期见！需要更多写作技巧的点击这里！
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